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Platform Of Sins And Goodbyes by ~mysticsilverstar:iconmysticsilverstar:



He lays his heavy heart in her hands
As she looks on wistfully, into the face of the moon
He stares lovingly into the face of a goddess
As she is divided, an inevitable choice to be made

He shall wait patiently forever for his long love
While she awaits another, in silent tears
But she can hold out no more, it's too late
She succumbs to sinful temptation, into fiery lust

Their quivering lips meet, there's no turning back now
He looks into her eyes with such love
She stares back with bittersweet sorrow
Still he thinks to himself, how beautiful she is

Their lips slowly part and a shaky breath is drawn
He knows it is his time for a reluctant departure
She knows the promise she broke that night
Tears from sorrowed lovers mingle, but both for different reasons

Watching after the train that disappears into dark nothingness
She holds on sinfully to his sweet unforgettable kiss
One full of love, passion and naive loyalty
But the love tainted, for she belonged to another

He stares into the stars and remembers her
Seeing her stand alone on the platform of goodbyes
Reminding him strongly of a sad, lonely goddess
So beautifully fragile under all her smiles

She promises herself she'd never tell another soul
How she betrayed her husband and broke her promises
While he promises himself he'll come back for her
To return and whisk his lover away to a fairytale
As they whisper their goodbyes into the night sky
©2008-2010 ~mysticsilverstar
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Author's Comments

Originally written on 7th Jan 2006, edited and resubmitted on 16th June 2008.

Made some tiny changes to but most of it is still the same.

Comment and critique appreciated

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That's really close to making me cry! It's so beautiful and moving and . . . sad!

Ems xxx

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