Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


Standing on the edge, a thousand frenzied thoughts overwhelmed him. His heartbeat equalled the state of adrenaline rush he placed his body in. Ignoring the beads of cold sweat forming along his forehead, he dared a glance down. There were ten metres worth of distance between him and the ground. Immediately, he closed his eyes and steadied himself, while simultaneously attempting to quieten his mind.

Did he really want this? To end all the screaming voices that surrounded him on a daily basis; the mocking, the teasing, the name-calling, the constant bullying. Everyone said he was too weak to do anything about it. But he will show them now. It was his turn to shine, his turn in the spotlight. ‘Yes,’ he whispered confidently, he wanted this desperately, craving to hear the hunters’ silence.

Slowly, with each step, he was closer to licking sweet victory off his lips. Charging himself for the momentous leap, he bent low whilst sweeping his hands in the air for balance. With a single, precise, practiced movement, he leapt.

Air rushed by his ears as he tried to control his body position, figuring out the best way to land. He didn’t want to feel pain – not too much anyway. Very faintly he heard someone screaming out from below. What was the verdict, he wondered cynically. Forcing his eyes open, he saw looks of horror and amazement glaring up at him. He smiled, wide and triumphantly before submitting completely to gravity’s consequence.

He held his breath, anticipating a violent, bone breaking, impact. As luck would have it, years of intense diving training paid off as he broke the water with a streamlined, perfect entry. Finally, he had accomplished what many of his friends had managed to do a long time ago. Embracing the cool water that washed away his terror and replaced it with excitement, he wondered what his diving peers would say of his first dive off the highest platform.
©2008-2010 ~mysticsilverstar
:iconmysticsilverstar:

Author's Comments

Written 21st June 2008.

Events and characters are purely fictional.

Inspired by a sight at the pool the other day. I saw a diver practicing off the 10metre platform and it looked like he was just falling. For a moment, it scared the hell out of me, but I remembered that he was doing this in a controlled environment. :P

First piece written in a while, please let me know honestly, what you think and what I can improve on. That being said, comments and critiques are greatly welcomed and appreciated.

Ashley

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconbleeding-moon3:
Wow, misleading! Nice ending though :)
Ems xxx

--
I want you to fuck off, as hard as you can.

Details

June 21, 2008
2.0 KB

Statistics

1
1 [who?]
37 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map